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Title: Not a god of drawing but with practice, perhaps, a cherub...
Post by: Dog Deever on 24 July, 2010, 11:24:45 PM
I took some time out from drawing lots of little panels to do a quick chick-pic today. It was nice just to be able to breathe on the page a bit. It's not anything like a finished piece of that, but it's served it's purpose (to give my head a break) so it probably won't get any further.
My rendition of Captain Sarita, though I tried to make her a bit more Arabic featured around the nose and mouth to make her a bit more exotic- I really love Steve Yeowell's art a lot, but I'll concede his women are sometimes a bit 'samey'. Anyhoo- like it, hate it or go 'meh'!
(http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h134/Dog_Deever/CptSarita.jpg)
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Post by: Jim_Campbell on 24 July, 2010, 11:29:31 PM
A woman's smile is, IMO, one of the hardest things there is to capture with pencil and paper. This is just lovely, Mr Deever. The hands, also the undoing of many a pencil-monkey, are just superb.

You may feel justifiably proud of this piece of work, and can drink your weak lemon drink now.

Cheers!

Jim
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Post by: The Legendary Shark on 24 July, 2010, 11:47:42 PM
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

Your apotheosis is doubtless imminent.
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Post by: flip-r mk2 on 25 July, 2010, 12:26:56 AM
Nice one Dog, definatley liking it.


filip


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Post by: CrazyFoxMachine on 25 July, 2010, 01:33:38 AM
Love it dog, excellent weight and proportions I'd say :D
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Post by: Woolly on 25 July, 2010, 02:05:34 AM
Lovely piece of work  :)
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Post by: Dog Deever on 25 July, 2010, 02:29:06 AM
Thanks folks.
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Post by: Bolt-01 on 25 July, 2010, 08:24:10 AM
Yeah, that's nice, now GET BACK TO DRAWING STRIPS FOR ME YOU SHIFTLESS PROTO-DROID!


sorry- it really is lovely and you know I love your work...
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Post by: worldshown on 25 July, 2010, 08:36:26 AM
It's a really nice drawing.

Were you using Lucy Pargeter (Chas Dingle from Emmerdale) as a face reference though? It does look a lot like her.
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Post by: Bhuna on 25 July, 2010, 09:35:56 AM
Very nice DD!
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Post by: TordelBack on 25 July, 2010, 11:18:13 AM
Brill!
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Post by: Dunk! on 25 July, 2010, 11:28:20 AM
Like it.
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Post by: mygrimmbrother on 25 July, 2010, 12:49:16 PM
That's a fantastic drawing Dog, well done sir.
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Post by: IAMTHESYSTEM on 25 July, 2010, 12:53:29 PM
Very good Dog Deever. A lovely smile and lovelier curves. What more could you want?  :)
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Post by: I, Cosh on 25 July, 2010, 01:29:34 PM
Very nice and you can even tell she's not wearing a bra!
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Post by: Mardroid on 25 July, 2010, 05:29:56 PM
Quote from: IAMTHESYSTEM on 25 July, 2010, 12:53:29 PM
Very good Dog Deever. A lovely smile and lovelier curves. What more could you want?  :)

For a nice change, it's not the big curves you often see in comic books either. (Or maybe they just look that way being viewed front on.)

Not that I dislike big curves, it's just nice to see a girl of different proportions. If that makes sense.

A lovely picture.
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Post by: Zarjazzer on 25 July, 2010, 05:46:38 PM
it really is a lovely, evocative pic. great stuff -strange to regard some graphite on  paper as "beautiful" but she is.
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Post by: JayzusB.Christ on 25 July, 2010, 06:08:03 PM
Very nice, Dog. I would.
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Post by: Dog Deever on 25 July, 2010, 07:38:12 PM
Thanks all.
Answers to questions and observations- gaaah now I have to think!

QuoteThe hands, also the undoing of many a pencil-monkey
It's not often you can get hands reasonable without too much problems- I'm no expert but sometimes I think that it's got more to do with the actual angles you portray- sometimes they just look wrong whatever you do- I suppose it's just a microcosm of design in general. Luckily this one worked out ok, I wish it was like that all the time!

Lucy Pargeter? I dunno who she is- never watch soaps, they drive me up the wall. A quick google reveals..
(http://www.poundlandblog.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/04/lucy-pargeter.jpg)

I suppose there's a slight resemblance, but she has a longer face and perhaps larger eyes, with a differently structured nose- especially the end of it. Of course, I did use photo references for a few of bits and pieces.

I usually try to avoid drawing massive tits and narrow waist like you see in comics, mainly for the same reasons IAMTHESYSTEM says. I mean, it has it's place and all, but I wanted a more natural looking figure.

Quoteand you can even tell she's not wearing a bra!
hahahahahahahah! Great!
I was actually pretty concious of that as it happens, I didn't think push-up bras were around then so I reasoned that a high, in yer face cleavage would be unlikely (unless she was wearing a bodice of some sort). A lot of female warriors bound themselves almost flat because swinging a set about while in action could be painful- in the same way modern athletes use proper sports bras to minimize mid-swing jiggling. But I didn't want her to end up looking like a ladyboy!
In a mood of self-doubt about the blank patch above her shirt top, I very nearly changed it to give her a bit of a cleavage.

So yes, Cosh- you can think of them as unfettered under that flimsy shirt...

QuoteYeah, that's nice, now GET BACK TO DRAWING STRIPS FOR ME YOU SHIFTLESS PROTO-DROID!

Fuckin hell- busted!
Wait a mo- 'PROTO-DROID'? I've been promoted! Working on it- I did it on me breaks, guv, honest injun!