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Show posts MenuQuote from: Bat King on 04 October, 2012, 06:55:18 PM
Like the look but there story doesn't grab me. I wish I could actually put my finger on why. The punch-line clearly fits the build up, so technically it is sound. As a parody piece with all the technical parts it is probably just bit hitting my funny-bone. Yet even with out the above praise I can easily see that many would find it quite funny.
Possibly the way it may have had a bigger impact on me is if it had been a two pager woitha single panel reveal on the second page. I think inadvertently my eye had already been drawn to the reveal even though I hadn't tread the dialogue out of order.
That said, very nice layout. Good depiction of characters. Nice colours.