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Conexus:
...And more script bring an end to the first episode.

P3.

1. Wide shot of rocket in space, flying towards the vast Space Ark.

2.  View inside the Space Ark Tall regal female looking Reptari, some scales and feathers white with age. Smaller and younger male by her side. Looking at an e-book type thing. Foresters, small brown green Reptari are scuttling about in the background spanners etc. in their belts.
MEEDOAR (FEMALE): ARE WE READY TO GO YET?
TIMODO (MALE): NOT YET, YOUR MAJESTY, WE STILL HAVE TO WAIT FOR A FEW MORE SPECIALISTS.

2. Similar  view as 2, but a male Forester has bumped into Meedoar at about thigh height, she is looking down on the forester, and Timodo is looking in the same direction as well.
MEEDOAR: WHY YOU LITTLE?
TIMODO: HE?S A FORESTER, AN ENGINEER. THEY?LL BE LOOKING AFTER THE STATE OF THE SHIP WHILE THE REST OF US WILL BE IN DEEP FREEZE

3.View of Forester cowering under the shadow of Meedoar.
FORESTER: SORRY YOUR HIGHNESS?
TIMODO (VOICE): THEY ARE VITAL, YOUR MAJESTY
MEEDOAR: BUT IF THERE ARE TOO MANY, IT?S JUST A WASTE OF OXYGEN, A WASTE OF FOOD, A WASTE OF TIME.

3. Meedoar shoots the Forester

4. Foresters nearby look up, Meedoar looking at them
MEEDOAR: NOW YOU LITTLE STINKBALLS KNOW WHAT?S COMING TO YOU IF YOU STEP OUT OF LINE. BACK TO WORK!
 
5. View of foresters muttering to themselves.

P4.

1. Large View of rocket in air lock, huge door into the ship open, foresters scurrying about.
COMPUTER: IT IS SAFE TO EXIT THE ROCKET NOW

2. View of Feemar and Rooko stepping down the rockets outside ladder onto the air lock?s floor.

3. Feemar and Rooko looking through the huge door should be huge, dwarfing them.
ROOKO: IT IS CERTAINLY, ERR, BIG, ISN?T IT?
FEEMAR: YEP BIG, THAT?S CERTAINLY A WORD TO DESCRIBE IT. COME ON WE NEED TO REGISTER

4. Rooko and Feemar walking along a corridor, Rooko nearly bumps into a forester Timodo is quickly walking the opposite direction to meet them
ROOKO: OHH, SORRY, I DIDN?T MEAN?

5. Same view but Timodo closer.  Feemar bends over to whisper something in Rooko?s ear.  

6. Same view, but Timodo right in front of them, e- book in hand.
TIMODO: ARE YOU ROOKO, HEAD BIOLOGIST AND FEEMAR, HEAD ANTHROPOLOGIST
FEEMAR: YES
ROOKO: YES

6. Close up of Timodo, holding out the e-book thing
TIMODO: WELL, I?LL HAVE TO TAKE YOUR FINGERPRINT?S WORD FOR IT, JUST PRESS YOUR HAND DOWN ON THE SCREEN. ONE AT A TIME, HE HE!

P5.

1. View Timodo looking at e-book.
TIMODO: WHADYA KNOW WE?VE GOT A FULL HOUSE! WE CAN FINALLY SET SAIL. COME ON I?LL TAKE YOU TO THE FREEZE CHAMBERS.

2. View of Feemar looking out of a window at Earth. (Late cretaceous so north and south America should be separate, with North America joined to Europe at the top. Africa should be much closer to South America and India should be an island not far off Africa. Australia should be part of Antarctica, and both the poles should be green)
FEEMAR: WAIT! CAN I JUST STAY HERE FOR A LITTLE WHILE?

3. Feemar?s eye view looking at Earth should be reflection like in the first panel on the first page.
CAPTION: HEY FEEMAR, WHY CRYING?
TIMODO (VOICE): SURE WHY NOT?

4. View of Space Ark blasting away.
CAPTION: SOME TIME YOU?LL REALISE YOU?RE ONE OF THE LUCKY ONES
TIMODO (VOICE): ... IT?S NOT AS IF WE?RE IN A RUSH TO GET ANYWHERE! HE HE!    

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