Been listening to Brink. I'm disappointed to say that I don't think this works.
The footsteps really annoy me. Because the dialogue is lifted straight from a visual medium, its signalled that characters are on the move by having the sound of foot steps...so two characters are chatting in a busy environment and "clunk clunk clunk" here comes someone else.
Brink is a story I love, but it just doesn't fit the format. Bridge shooting a guy in an early episode is a massive deal in the comic...here, its a messy sound effect and you don't know it happened until several minutes into the next scene.
It loses its power. So much of Brink is about the power of words and ideas, about how words can do real harm, so we have to be protected from curses, and certain syllables can make a person sick. On the page, where letters can sit alongside runes that symbolise alien concepts, that makes sense. Put on accents repeating "Phase Corozon" and it stops being an interesting idea.