In two words: COMIC SANS!
In slightly more words, I like it. You could do with varying the line weight a bit but I dig the style and there are lots of nice little details in the art.
Obviously with English not being your first language, the script needs corrected and tweaked in places so I would suggest handing the whole thing over to a letterer, but apart from that I'd say it's looking pretty good.
In slightly more words, I like it. You could do with varying the line weight a bit but I dig the style and there are lots of nice little details in the art.
Obviously with English not being your first language, the script needs corrected and tweaked in places so I would suggest handing the whole thing over to a letterer, but apart from that I'd say it's looking pretty good.