Art Stars 2023 Entry

[michaelarby]

Just sharing here for one last hurrah now that its over - my entry for the 2023 Art stars contest. Cheers!

[Trooper McFad]

That's dam good short/ sharp & sweet

Well done

[The Legendary Shark]

What he said - definitely Dreddworld.

[Funt Solo]

Love the double pay-off.

[The Legendary Shark]

"Momentarily thereafter" is a genius line.

[michaelarby]

Haha on reflection, I dont know why I didnt just say 'Moments later'

I think i should have split that 3rd panel into 2 as well, getting a closer look at the explosion.

[The Legendary Shark]

No, I think that third panel's great as it is - emphasizing the distance between Bill and the control he has over his own life.

[Le Fink]

As above, and I love the percent symbol and the cowering/surprised expression in the penultimate panel. Very nice.

[michaelarby]

As above, and I love the percent symbol and the cowering/surprised expression in the penultimate panel. Very nice.

Those i actually noticed from the accountant judges in the small house storyline (if i recall correctly) so thought would be a fun detsil to include!

[Funt Solo]

As above, and I love the percent symbol and the cowering/surprised expression in the penultimate panel. Very nice.

Those i actually noticed from the accountant judges in the small house storyline (if i recall correctly) so thought would be a fun detsil to include!

Yeah - Weston uses them:

[Le Fink]

Those i actually noticed from the accountant judges in the small house storyline (if i recall correctly) so thought would be a fun detsil to include!

Ah, I did not spot that at the time. Nice one. My art stars entry was considerably more rustic than most art-wise but it was a really good challenge to come up with a complete one-page story and then translate it to a comic. Much more involved than I expected!