Attempts at the sample scripts

[jock]

hey ade,

nice work, as always. but i was going to say the same thing about the lettering... the thing with it is, it's 'almost but not quite' and it doesn't help the art at all in my opinion. editors don't need to see it - they see bare pages all the time... they can judge a page on it's own merits.

[IAMTHESYSTEM]

I'm very ill with the return of the Flu bug but Adrian Bamforth's work clearly shows what an ace art forum this is!   

[3ciona]

hope you like it



best

[pauljholden]

Something bisley-esque - and yet, doesn't fall into the usual bisley-murky-clone area. Nice.
Lose the lettering though. (Don't make me keep having to say this!)

-pj

[SuperSurfer]

I like that. Good take on the very difficult main image. Bit of a Carl Critchlow type vibe going on there.

[Hoagy]

I'd dare say Hicklenton would like the look of the coloured work. Without the lettering too.

[3ciona]

here is the version without lettering.

[Van Dom]

That is very groovy. Bisley/Hicklenton amalgamation. I like !

[Hoagy]

Yep; and clear as day as to what is afoot.

I failed to remember mentioning how much I liked Ade's work. Ade-I like it! Loads. But cannot deny PJ's points.

[Darren Stephens]

Lovely stuff, 3ciona. 

[3ciona]

Thanks for all the comments. Here is page 2

[Richmond Clements]

That's really good.

[Cpt Rhodes]

Yup, definitely something special here.

[SuperSurfer]

Excellent work. Look forward to seeing more.

[CrazyFoxMachine]

Yeah I do like that - the colours suit it really well. It's like Jock meets Dom Reardon in an alley and they share spaghetti.