> I have absoluteley no idea what you are saying.
Why, don't you speak English? Tell me what you're having trouble understanding and I will explain it _again_ ...
I'm saying that any writer worth their salt chooses each and every word with precision, not only to convey information necessary to advance the plot, but also to convey to the reader mood, atmosphere and character.
If you are honestly saying to me that you cannot see _any_ difference between the two hypothetical lines of dialogue I offered as illustration of this point then you're no more a writer than are the contents of my cats' litter tray.
> scojo who writes words, not analyses them....
Yes, a writer writes words. And then a _good_ writer analyses them, changes them, shows them to someone else for more analysis and then changes them some more.
I'm actually offering you some constructive criticism here. I've sold comic scripts to actual, real publishers and one of things editors seemed to have liked is my dialogue - notwithstanding a propensity to write too much of it. But, hey, that's what editors are for ... ;-)
Cheers
Jim
Why, don't you speak English? Tell me what you're having trouble understanding and I will explain it _again_ ...
I'm saying that any writer worth their salt chooses each and every word with precision, not only to convey information necessary to advance the plot, but also to convey to the reader mood, atmosphere and character.
If you are honestly saying to me that you cannot see _any_ difference between the two hypothetical lines of dialogue I offered as illustration of this point then you're no more a writer than are the contents of my cats' litter tray.
> scojo who writes words, not analyses them....
Yes, a writer writes words. And then a _good_ writer analyses them, changes them, shows them to someone else for more analysis and then changes them some more.
I'm actually offering you some constructive criticism here. I've sold comic scripts to actual, real publishers and one of things editors seemed to have liked is my dialogue - notwithstanding a propensity to write too much of it. But, hey, that's what editors are for ... ;-)
Cheers
Jim