That's rather impressive.
That's excellent!
This is impressive. The POV flips in the flak section aren't doing a great job of telling the story - we switch from being ahead of the ships looking back at them to being behind them looking ahead, and then the camera seems like it is a ship, and rapidly closes on the one in front of it - only for it just to be a cam movement.
I'm nit picking, but, then, editing stuff's important, so...
Well while we're at it .. really annoyed me that guy didn't have his helmet on with less than a minute to landing and even when they started coming under heavy fire he still didn't put it on .. hope it's a Chekov's helmet type situation though .. let's wait and see :)