Quote from: Leigh S on 21 May, 2013, 07:37:25 PM
I enjoy Moffatt's ideas, but this episode was a good example of the "tell don't show" that Dr Who has fallen into increasingly over its 21st C guise. Partly that's due to time constraints of 45 minute episodes and I imagine partly it's a budget thing too. You could more uncharitably say it's much easier for the writer than actually thinking through the ideas, and a cover for the fact that if you do, a lot of them dont make much sense.
The end result of this for me leaves the episode as a series of interesting post it notes rather than a compelling story in its own right. Moffatt doesn't help that feel with his trademark wisecracking sound bite style of dialogue - I like the odd wise crack, and quotable dialogue is always, err quotable... but when everything is a wise crack (looking at you, River), it becomes tedious, undermines the characters, and any tension - case in point is the scene where Clara realises she has to jump in the timestream - it's like she has a list of previously established catchphrases she has to tick off; "impossible girl", "souffle girl", pausing just in time to make sure she doesnt forget to quote herself with a "run you clever boy".
Given an extra episode, or even just an extra 15 minutes to fill out the ideas would go a long way to making these stories feel like more than an excited report from a particularly Sunny D'ed up 10 year old.
I agree. I've felt most of the stories this series could have used an extra 10-15 minutes to really flesh them out instead of having Smith manically explain what is supposed to have happened.

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