You thought you'd "try" some Rogue Trooper pages and that's what you come up with? Man, I'd love to see what you come up with should you ever actually succeed, Fhiachi. Because, basically, what TordelBack said.
Particularly struck by the half-detail on Helm. And the Joe Pineapples. And all of it. You certainly gave the action a real sense of storytelling flow there, with a great mix of panel size choices giving it some enjoyable rhythm and punch. The only panel that I was stuck on was the second one on the third page, since I wondered if it wouldn't look odd without dialogue and there didn't seem to be much space for any. But, honestly, I expect this is me just being a nitpick - especially since I actually had fun following the action. Very crisp storytelling. Thanks for that jolt of fun.
Particularly struck by the half-detail on Helm. And the Joe Pineapples. And all of it. You certainly gave the action a real sense of storytelling flow there, with a great mix of panel size choices giving it some enjoyable rhythm and punch. The only panel that I was stuck on was the second one on the third page, since I wondered if it wouldn't look odd without dialogue and there didn't seem to be much space for any. But, honestly, I expect this is me just being a nitpick - especially since I actually had fun following the action. Very crisp storytelling. Thanks for that jolt of fun.

