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playing with shadows on the Wacom tablet etc.

I am more of a fan of the film uniform (far more practical) than the illustration versions with the massive shoulder emblems !!

Nice work CB, love seeing WIP!! Not sure I agree with your opinion on the outfit though. More practical yes - but not nearly as pleasing to the eye!!

Good work Bhuna, love the Skulls expression following that smack in the chops!!

haha 'tenticled goodness' love that, thank you mike!

Blackmocco - genius dude, used to love this show and love your take.

Recently I was asked to draw and colour a couple of pages for the opening of a B Movie project which I 'assume' is called 'Its Here', a kind of take on the old 1950's style of sci fi - I assume they're gonna bounce around the panels as with a digital comic!! Very excited!!

Anyway the film makers have given me permission to share and so here it is!!

JT Peg........outstanding........that's all.

Chris, BMB, Archie, Simon - that is some quality right there!!

Ooooh Simon, that is beautiful work, love it man!!

[Steve]

Everything about that last panel works better, Steve; the composition especially, but even the balance of tones seems more assured. This is fascinating to watch - thanks for posting.

That's great Sauchie, thank you for the feedback, very easy to become lost in the image and not subjective so your feedback is invaluable.
That said I have revisited this image today and am still happy with it which is a good sign, the last attempt at this particular panel, I left, came back and straight felt stirrings of discontentment - Sparkys comments just confirmed what I had already felt.

Thanks again.

Ok so I have redrawn the final panel on page five - as SParky pointed out the original wasn't high enough with regards to angle and also I generally became less and less happy with it.

So here's the amended version.

Thanks Sparko - just redrawing the last panel on page five following your feedback, the more I looked at it the more I agree with you and also decided I wasn't happy with the image generally.

Regarding the additional panel perhaps one of the 2000AD crew could elaborate on whether or not I would be marked down for adding an additional panel IF it works.

My last submission, 'PF' was declined but the feedback from Mr Smith was that the story telling and panel layout were good, my downfall was the unrefined inks - and I added around 5 panels to that one, but did explain this in my cover letter, so really not sure.

That final pic of Dredd is sweet!
I'm no expert but i wouldn't add any panels, just stick to the brief for a submission plus u don't wanna upset any writers (sensitive types that they are!)

Cheers

Chi

Thanks for the feedback Mr Chivo - taken on board.

By the way I added an additonal panel, the close up of Klein looking in the mirror is additional as I felt there should be a transition between the mood of how he was feeling looking into the mirror following Dredd's comment that he ain't no judge and the realisation that he looks like his father - and of that when he flips!!

Thanks for the feedback Sparky, yeah I wasn't sure about the last panel, hence putting it up for feedback, pleased I got some prior to sending it off. The angle is slightly raised but not as extreme as on page 1, thought some variety would be good but following your feedback will have another bash.

Here's the final page!!

Beautiful work Doombot!!

Okey dokey - here is page five of my Cycle of Violence submission pieces.

As always feedback is both encouraged and welcomed!!