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Steven Denton

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #990 on: 18 November, 2016, 10:10:05 am »
Thought I'd post my entry for the 2000AD Art Competition at Thought Bubble this year.  Was lucky enough (and thrilled!) to get through to the final six.  The script was 'The Timeless Assassin' by Rory McConville.  I'd love any feedback/ criticism/ etc.

I love this thread, its great to see everyone's approaches to the scripts. TB was similar, it was a real eye-opener to see how everyone had handled the script. Such a huge variation in approach. Pity we only got to see page 01 of everyone's entry but I suppose time is always a hard taskmaster at these things.  I thought the other entries were great, Tilen Javornik's entry was a very worthy winner, clearly the best one. Big congratulations to him, looking forward to seeing his first story in the prog.

As an aside, Thought Bubble was brilliant, met loads of great people, including a lot of my art heroes, not to mention meeting Crazyfoxmachine and Bolt-01 of this very forum. Lovely lads!



Great stuff, I really like the lay out.

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #991 on: 15 December, 2016, 05:06:34 pm »
Hello here is my art of Judge Dredd cycle of violence :)



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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #992 on: 28 February, 2017, 03:57:20 pm »
hi there....
new to this board! found the "cycle of violence" script here and tried working from it for personal practise.
i didn't send it in or something...
i actually didn't care much for comics the last few years... but some weeks ago the old love suddenly came back.
i kinda grew up reading 2000ad comics.. so playing around with this script was a lot of fun!

any crit would be highly appreciated.














if the images won't show up: http://sojustuff.tumblr.com/post/157824002131

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #993 on: 27 April, 2017, 06:21:44 pm »
I think it looks cool.

Some of the characters don't look quite right; Dredd on Page One, Panel 5 and the bully dunking the kid on Page Two, Panel Four.

Still, it's very almost perfect.

I'll leave it to the actual artists to give a more detailed analysis.

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #994 on: 02 July, 2017, 06:03:33 pm »
Karn The Foul Eye!
Been working on this attempt for a while, inbetween working away from home ..
Been agonising over certain panels! the last on page 1 and the 1st on page 2 and am going to change the last on page 1 for certain- and parts of the other.
Any advice is most welcome, I have tried twice before on the Cycle of Violence script, this is my first on the Karn-
please excuse the scans, I've had to stitch them back together in photoshop


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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #995 on: 08 August, 2017, 08:32:29 pm »
AAAnd page 3 of Karn, very slow going with working away from home, a little tidying up needed but here it is-
again, any suggestions/crits, advice more than welcome- cheers

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #996 on: 03 July, 2018, 10:53:04 pm »
Holy moly - that looks astounding!!

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #997 on: 03 July, 2018, 11:08:11 pm »
I didn't know this thread existed - really stunning work on show with some brilliant insights on how people have approached these sample strips. I've been toying with having a go at one or two of these myself, but damn... I feel quite "intimidated" by what I've seen..! lol

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #998 on: 27 April, 2019, 09:55:43 am »
Cycle Of Violence


Page 1

Page 2

Page 3

Page 4

Page 5

Page 6


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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #999 on: 28 April, 2019, 08:40:44 pm »

Uncle Pat's just posted this.

Good luck, you talented bunch!


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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #1000 on: 07 May, 2019, 12:52:09 pm »

Uncle Pat's just posted this.

Good luck, you talented bunch!

If Belardinelli was still with us today, he'd so be the man for the job here...

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #1001 on: 07 May, 2019, 01:53:28 pm »

Absolutely!


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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #1002 on: 07 May, 2019, 02:38:54 pm »
I just love reading through those world bibles. Pat's lost nothing when it comes to world-building, has he?

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #1003 on: 07 May, 2019, 05:17:08 pm »
Heck of a time getting onto his website though! Seems my phone is the only route.  Pat is nothing if not a ideas machine

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Re: Attempts at the sample scripts
« Reply #1004 on: 28 May, 2019, 04:06:15 pm »
Cycle Of Violence

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Page 4



My favourite pages are page one and five. On page 4 the face of the judge with water running down the helmet and with the background lost in the distance - great image! 
A really solid effort overall :thumbsup: