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Dredd/Krustabi crossover! Monkeys in Hats! And much more besides!

Started by Dudley, 30 April, 2004, 06:11:06 PM

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Dudley

I googled "free naked women", and you know what, CyberM?  You're right!  They ARE out there.

I'm off to hold auditions.

Mr C


Trout

He's thumbing a lift, by the look of him.

- Trout

Max Kon


Oddboy

I enjoyed this tale, was good.

Trout was right though (blast him!) it does get a bit confusing in the middle.

I liked the little zoom-ins on the first page, they're class.
Better set your phaser to stun.

Bolt-01

Trout. In Dudleys defence, I pushed the strip from 6 to 9 pages to get the story in a format where the panel to page rate was workable. Maybe it should have been two stories (?) but I'm happy with it.

The thing though, is that this is Dudleys first script, and I had a whale of a time scribbling it.

Krusti: The script does deserve to be drawn, but there are plenty of peeps who can draw chicks better than me. If you find someone who wants to collarborate, I'll happily storyboard the strip for someone else to turn into soft porn for you.

Tulkas: Have you read the Dredd v Death novelisation? Finished it last night and was very surprised to find a perp named King Louis in the book! Gordon Rennie seems to have been rummaging around in Dudleys mind again (hope he washed!)

Bolt-01

Max Kon


Trout

Bolt, there's no need to defend Dudley.

It was intended as constructive criticism, and as part of a positive reaction.

- Trout

Dudley

...and taken as such!

My original script had an average of about 11 panels per page, which works when Mark harrison is showing random bits of Durham's breasts, but not so well when you're trying to move the plot along with each panel.  You'd have needed a microscope and some considerable time.

No, I really do like critical as well as nice comments, so keep 'em coming!

Dudley

Oh, and as I've just been reminded (thanks, UKDane!), PLEASE do the vote thing on the Fan Thrills page.  At the end of the day, that's the most honest appraisal it's going to get.  Check out the other strips at the same time, of course...

Link: http://www.2000adonline.com/?zone=input&page=thrillindex" target="_blank">Fan thrills


Steamboy

wondering what the hell Mark Spitz was doing in the strip....it was all made clear.  Very funny and top quality for a fan strip.

CU Krestel