Attempts at the sample scripts

[Proudhuff]

IMHO that's progworthy 

[mimikeke]

love the way you did the explosion! really nice <3

[plwoods]

Very nice

[Jon]

Thanks. You're all very kind.

Page 2.

[staticgirl]

It's all very good but I completely love the expressions on the face of that bloke with the cloth cap. Especially the first panel. You don't need the speech bubbles to read his emotions.

[Jon]

It's all very good but I completely love the expressions on the face of that bloke with the cloth cap. Especially the first panel. You don't need the speech bubbles to read his emotions.

Again, thanks. It's good to hear as that was definitely one of the key things I was looking to improve.

Page 3:

[plwoods]

Looking great. Cant wait to see the last two pages. Keep it up really wicked stuff

[Jon]

Page 4

[Dunk!]

Getting a Chris Weston/Glenn Fabry vibe from these, liking it.

Dunk!

[Link Prime]

Getting a Chris Weston/Glenn Fabry vibe from these, liking it.

I thought exactly the same.
You're a superb artist Jon.

[Jon]

Wow. Thank you so much.

[Jim_Campbell]

Getting a Chris Weston/Glenn Fabry vibe from these, liking it.

Steve Pugh for me. 'Tis good work.

Cheers

Jim

[Jon]

Starting to experience a distinct loss of identity now....

Again, thanks. These are all encouraging names to be uttered anywhere near mine.

[plwoods]

I'd have to agree with the Pugh/Fabry/Weston thing going on. Great work.

My only concern is that hand in panel 3 from the vicar.

BTW great camera angels on these panels as well.

[Jon]

Thanks, and hmm, yeah, maybe.

All these pages will get a redraw anyway. I tend to go through 'em and then go back with fresh eyes.